1、（a）软弱、羞怯的： If you think I can fill the position after you have read my letter, I shall be glad to talk with you. 读完此信后倘您认为敝人可补缺，敝人愿和您一谈。
(b)改写后（较佳）： If my application has convinced you of my ability to satisfy you, I should welcome the opportunity to talk with you, so that you may judge my personal qualifications further.
2、（a）怀疑，不妥、不安全的： If you‘re interested, let me know immediately, as I‘m sure and interview will convince you I‘m the man for the job. 倘贵公司有兴趣，请即告知，敝人深信与您面谈可以使您相信，敝人适合担任此职。
（b）改写后： May I have an interview? You can reach me by telephone at Taipei 884525 between the hours of 7-9 a.m. and 5:30-9:30p.m. any evening. 可否赐予面谈？您可在每天上午七至九时，下午五时半至九时电884525号。
3、陈腐的句子： Hoping you will give me an interview, I am……（我希望您惠予面谈） Anticipating a favorable decision, I wait your……（等候您的佳音） Trusting your reply will be satisfactory, I remain(静候满意的答复)
4、哀求式的句子，不够完整（漏掉面谈时间）： Won‘t you please give me the chance to interview your? I can be reached by calling Kenmore 69781.