不够尊重老人的原因雅思作文
There is not enough respect for the elderly people. What are the causes and what problems does this phenomenon create?
There is a growing tendency nowadays for some people to regard the elderly people as a troublesome group. Gradually, this leads to not revere （这是啥意思？！ lead to 后面接 doing ！） the elderly people in diverse conditions. Yet in my opinion, instead of contempting every one should treat them as our treasure （这句话本身就有点变扭，感觉很怪！） . But, what causes the promble? Here i give two major reasons （这句太废话了，把两个理由总结一下，写出来会比较好） .
On the one hand, some elder people （第一段用的是 elderly people ，这里怎么又变了？！） live without any income. In addition, they are weak even some of them cannot look after themselves （这分明是两个句子，怎么可以写在一起！） .Thus, they have to be given a hand. A recent statistics （ statistics 这里好像应该是复数吧） shows that 90 percent of the elderly people need to provide （应该是被动语态吧） the allowance and nurses. It costs 80 billions （ billion 不可数的！） yuan every year. So the elderly people become a burden to the society. On the other hand ,the young are to blame. Their consciousness of respecting the elderly people should be promoted. What is worse, they dont regard anyone.
Nevertheness （应该是 nevertheless ） , for the above reasons, we also can take immediate and specific measures to cope with them. Because no one can deny the fact that a persons moral is the most important aspect of the society. If we lose it,I （人称不要变来变去） cant image, （这里逗号多余） what may happen to our society. How terrible it is! As is known to everyone, we are all getting old. But, we may not being esteemed. A yeasty world is proceeding.
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