雅思小作文功能句型-雅思小作文精彩结尾示例

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雅思小作文功能句型汇总-雅思小作文精彩结尾示例

  雅思小作文,主要是图表类作文。题干通常要求我们对题目中所给的图表进行信息提取,包括主要信息的概括、以及信息间的相关比较。下面具体看看雅思小作文功能句型都有哪些吧!

雅思小作文功能句型汇总-雅思小作文精彩结尾示例

  一、雅思小作文功能句型汇总

  表示上升

  (1) The house price increased / grew / went up / rose by *** / to ***.

  (2) The number of overseas students increased steadily / significantly / considerably / moderately / slightly from *** to ***.

  (3) The production of corn was on the rise, up from *** to ***.

  (4) The consumption of chicken showed / witnessed / saw a rising / upward trend.

  (5) There was a dramatic increase in the amount of chicken consumed.

  表示下降

  (1) The number of Japanese tourists dropped / declined / went down / fell / reduced by *** / to ***.

  (2) Beef consumption has declined dramatically / significantly / sharply / steadily / moderately from *** to ***.

  (3) The annual production rate was on the decline, down from *** to ***.

  (4) The divorce rate showed / witnessed / saw a falling / downward trend.

  (5) There was a slight decrease in the amount of fish consumed.

  “倍数”表示法

  (1) The amount of coal consumed was three times (as much as / more than) that of oil.

  (2) The percentage of female students increased three folds / three times.

  (3) The amount of beef consumed almost doubled / tripled, up / rising / climbing from *** to ***.

  (4) The production of cars in factory A was three times as many as that in factory B.

  (5) Factory A produced three times as many cars as Factory B.

  “比较”表示法

  (1) The consumption of beef was 70 grams more / less than that of lamb.

  (2) People spent 36 hours on housework, compared with 25 hours two years before.

  (3) Students who watch less television have higher scores.

  (4) The number of visitors from France was the largest in the four groups / larger than any other groups.

  (5) People spent the most money on food and drinks.

  “占据”表示法

  (1) Oil accounted for / constituted / made up 25% of the energy source used in power plants.

  (2) The energy source for power generation was composed of / was made up of 50% of coal, 30% of hydro power and 20% of oil.

  (3) The proportion / percentage of expenditure on food was 45% in 2000.

  (4) Coal produced / contributed almost 75% of electricity.

  (5) Coal has become the fuel for more than 75% of electricity produced.

  表示“平稳”或者“波动”

  (1) The amount of water used for agriculture remained/stayed stable/steady/unchanged for 5 years in a row.

  (2) The unemployment rate was flat at 6%.

  (3) The house price stabilized at a high level from 1998 to 2000.

  (4) The power consumption levels out / levels off in this period.

  (5) The power consumption fluctuated in this period.

  “极值”或者“超越”表示法

  (1) The proportion of migrant workers reached a record high of / a peak of 60% in 2005.

  (2) The birth rate peaked at 3% in 2005.

  (3) The rainfall in 2000 was 1500 mm that year, a new low in twenty years.

  (4) The percentage of smokers in female grew to a record high of 37% in 1990 and outmatched / exceeded that of their male counterpart.

  二、雅思小作文经典结尾示例

  Wild animals have no place in the 21st century. Some people think that preventing these wild animals from dying out is a waste of resource. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

  结尾1:

  Someone said safeguard of wild animals is a waste of resource, but I do not agree. It seems we would spend some time, wealth and manpower on this meaningless thing. Actually we also do this for human being ourselves. Let’s protect wild animals right now.

  评:结尾第一句话,是对于考官给出的观点的转述,应放在文章开头就出现。结尾不是申明中心句,而应是对全文观点的总结。大作文要收的坚定有力,seems让文章显得说服力不足,meaningless跟全文观点相孛。最后一句有喊口号的意味,不符合英语议论文的.习惯,同样的意思可改换客观平实的文风收尾。

  结尾2:

  To sum up, we can not live without wild animals due to their profound effects on us. For this reason, we should try our best to protect them. Let’s remember one thing---- protecting wild animals is equivalent to protecting ourselves.

  评:双重否定表示强调,是英语议论文的常见手法,令结尾收的坚定有力。Profound effects深远影响很好地呼应了文中提到过的野生动物保护的意义,令文章浑然一体。作者的观点跟结尾1作者观点完全一样,但采用了平实的陈述口气,并用了书面的地道词汇,equivalent to ,是一个很不错的结尾。

  结尾3:

  Certainly, our diet cannot be without meat. There are living stocks, which can provide us with sufficient and nutritious produce. Therefore, we need not to resort to wild animals, especially the endangered ones. To protect animals is to protect our living environment. Every individual should join efforts to keep the diversity of animals.

  评:作者不仅会用否定句表达强调,还很及时地采用了让步式的收尾,指出,人当然要吃肉,但有众多家畜,不必杀戮野生动物,尤其是濒危的物种。让步式结尾让文章显的客观公正,符合英语议论文的要求和习惯,总体很有说服力。再加上语言上同样成功,地道的措辞,如,living stocks, sufficient and nutritious, resort to,endangered ones, join efforts, diversity 是一篇8分作文的经典结尾。

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