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1月25日托福写作考试分析

发布时间:2017-01-27编辑:lm

  Integrated Writing

  话题:United States- wellness programs bring lots of benefits to the companies and employees

  阅读观点

  1. become a motivational tool for people to lose weight and quit smoking,research shows that cash can make people change their habit more easily。

  2. 奖励只针对达到目标的员工,有点not fair。

  3. although cost companies a lot of money, 从long term角度能收回来。

  听力观点【反驳阅读】

  1. 短期减小,是一个动力but can not keep for a long period. Research shows that after several years the people are back to their bad habit.

  2. not fair是因为每个人自身条件不一样的。Some people have no time to exercise, because they need to take care of their family and to cope with chores, some people are genetically fat and they need to be charged higher because会花更多时间。

  3. 收不回来many employees not stay in one company forever, they will change for their own financial benefits to other company,政府也没有政策去帮助员工,所以损失大。

  Independent Writing

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

  Classmates and partners can communicate with each other in person to finish the project better than by sending e-mail.

  【考题内容】你是否同意以下观点?小伙伴们想要更好去完成一项工作,面对面交流的方式会比发送邮件更好。

  【题型分析】联系face-to-face communication。

  【谋篇布局】

  Para 1: Introduction.(大背景引入话题,表明立场)

  社会发展科技进步,越来越多的交流方式进入了人们的生活。In my opinion, nothing beats speaking to another person face-to-face. For group or study fellows, in person conversation is the most convenient form, because it can eliminate misunderstandings immediately, cement relationships and encourage continued interaction.

  Para 2: Body Paragraph 1(分论点,解释,举例)

  The first and most obvious advantage of face-to-face communication has over an e-mail is that there is the ability for an interactive conversation. 如果发送的邮件中存在误解,那小组成员要花很多的时间去纠正这个误解,以致会拖累整个project的进度,而面对面交流不存在这样的问题。

  Para 3: Body Paragraph 2(分论点,解释,举例)

  When doing a conversation in person, you communicate with more than verbal words, instead, you express with your body language and even your tone of voice. 在完成一个项目的时候,成员们很有可能会产生思想或观点上的碰撞,发送邮件会导致很多误解造成团队合作的不和谐。Joking and irony are particularly difficult to express, identify and enjoy without seeing the expression on one’s face, or watching the movements of their bodies.

  Para 4: Body Paragraph 3(让步Concession)

  Admittedly, sending e-mails to partners bears its certain advantages, like organizing logic minds or storing some vital information. 但是要高效地去完成一个工作,面对面交流还是最重要的一种方式,其他方式可做辅助功能。

  Para 5: Conclusion(重申观点)

  In conclusion, communication in person is more important.

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