2016考研英语:图画作文三大死法

发布时间:2017-06-04 编辑:bin

  摘要:考研英语图画作文虽然庞杂,主要特征无非是人物、动物、物体,如果你的作文不会写描述,那么就要“暴死”,主题不明朗面临“猝死”。语言搭配不合理、语法错误多则“小刀割死”。下面,小编为你讲解考研英语图画作文如何得高分。

  不会写描述的“暴死”型

  不注意观察角度,经常把自己明明不会写的单词当成描述的主题,这样的话,第一段就没写完、或者没写好,第二段也就无从谈起了。

  其实考研图画虽然庞杂,主要特征无非是人物、动物、物体,三种情况分别处理为:

  1) 如果人多,就动作神态,物体带着写,能写则写,不会写别去送死,比如2009年的那次“网络”,既然不会写外面的那个蜘蛛网,就从屋里的人物写,干吗那么实诚?The picture above depicts many youngsters, who are sitting in therooms of their own. Some of them are staring at their computer screens, whereasthe others are playing video games or chatting with their friends. Obviously,all of them seem greatly interested in the cyber world around. (那个蜘蛛网明明是障眼法,能写则写,不能写就换个角度。)

2016考研英语:图画作文三大死法

  2) 如果人少,咱就动作、神态,加个心理分析,无非是悲观、乐观、(形容词别is/are/变成becomeincreasingly…, full of…/seem to/be…/appear…/look…)一些物体词汇能写则写,不写放弃。2008年那年的考题,不会写拐杖怎么办:The picture above depicts two youngsters, who are standing shoulderto shoulder. Hand in hand, they are moving steadily forward along a path.However, neither of them seems to be depressed and anxious. Rather, both of thembecome increasingly self-confident and cheerful, even though they each haveonly one leg.(注意这里的几个处理方法:1)考生其实不会写拐杖,不要硬写,因为那样基本就“死菜”了。有考生考上后跟我说:“我本来就不会写拐杖,那么何必想这个词怎么写呢?还不如大胆猜想这两个人的情绪。2)不会写残疾人,就写心情。没看见什么disabled, handicapped这类的所谓大词,但是考官基本上能看懂,不会给你满分,但是也不会给你低分。)

  3) 如果是物体动物为中心,那可能得写象征点主题:至少得留一个主动用法、一个被动用法备用,如standfor, can be regarded as a symbol as,用这几个词点主题就行了。如果根本没有主题归纳的意识,这种文章的描述就会写得比较少,因为内容本身没有什么可描述的,用象征直接点中心思想就可以,不要“纠缠”。

  总之,要想不“暴死”,就别太实诚,要懂得选择观察的角度,避实击虚。背到最后也是人多、人少、物体、动物这几种情形,背一大圈儿还是回到起点。

  主题不明朗的“猝死”型

  这种考生有一个共同的特点,那就是他们都不仔细阅读图画下方的文字暗示,并通过对这个文字暗示进行分析,进而归纳出文章要考的主题。如果不能和文章的主题相关,他们写出的文章自然就是没有意义,自然也就不可能得到满意的分数了。

  请看以下这篇文章:2008年考题“你我一起、走南闯北”

  The picture highlight a focal social point, that is, friendship andcommunication is indispensable.(错误1)

  To begin with, it is not only beneficial for advance of a nation, but alsoessential for development of a person.(错误2)

  What is more, it can teachpeople treat others with sympathy, sincerity and love. Still, it can helppeople obtain more opportunities in the competition and achieve themselves inthe prospective career. Last but not the least, it will certainly exertpositive influence on sustainable development of society.(错误3)

  点评:虽然考生在上述段落中用了一些难词,比如indispensable,essential,sympathy, sincerity, 但是得分仍然不高。从语法单词的角度看,这篇文章的错误似乎并不多,但是文章将主题句写成了friendship and communication is indispensable,可是2008年文章主题是“合作”,考官阅读时肯定会有一种文不对题的感觉。这篇文章告诉我们,如果考生在没有看懂题目的情况下就开始写作,即使写了象indispensable这样的“大词”,语法结构也没有错误,只要是文不对题,考官仍然会毫不客气地给出低分。因为看不到合作(或者那么是合作的近义词)考官就会立刻失去耐性,认为你根本就没看懂题目,他“失性”、你“猝死”。

  建议:这个考生的写作基础其实并不弱,背得也不错,但是他拿到文章之后,没有通过题目中的文字暗示判定写作主题,而是很随意地按照自己的想法,而不是文章的主题词写作。其实这个同学只要明确文章的主题“合作”,然后把句子重新组织一下就可以了,具体写法如下:The primary purpose of this picture is to show(套话要少写)that a growing number of people have come to realize thatcooperation is not only necessary, but also indispensable for one’s career.(首句用“重要性”的句子点题,) As a result, theyincreasingly stress the fundamental role of cooperation in their career(延伸句1) By doing so, they can improve working skills necessary for theirprospective career, gradually fitting into a competitive society and carvingtheir career. (延伸句2) Still, cooperation enhances mutualunderstanding between people, thus providing them with mental comfort as wellas spiritual back-up.(延伸句3)Tosum up, in today’s world, nothing is more importantthan cooperation (尾句要和主题呼应,可以换写和“重要性”有关的句子,做到首尾呼应,中间展开。)

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