考研专家针对辅导学生写出的文章、句子、语法结构与用词均无太大毛病,但仍然得不到高分,主要原因是句式缺乏新意。正如前面所述,如果文章中简单句用得太多,文章便显得无生气,也说明考生英语水平还待提高。所以考生在写作时从遣词到造句,从造句到段落,一篇文章才能完成,每个句子和段落都有一写的规律可循,都有自己的写作技巧。
应届毕业生求职网考研总结出下面几种造句时要注意的几个问题:
一、避免语法方面的错误
1. 结构不完整,例如:
误:We congratulated to him.
正:We congratulated him.
误:Do you like listening to other people to talk?
正:Do you like listening to other talk?
2.混淆词义,例如
误:He raised to greet us (raise举起)
正:He rose to greet us.(rise起立)
误: I laid in bed all morning.(lay/laid, laid放)
正:I lay in bed all morning.(lie/lay, lain躺)
3.累赘,例如:
原句:In China, Some cities are seriously polluted, and some cities are being polluted.
改进:In China, Some cities are seriously polluted, some being polluted.
4.词性误用,例如:
误:Good conditions is very benefit.
正:Good conditions are very beneficial.
误:They don’t feel nerves.
正:They don’t feel nervous.
5. 主谓不一致,例如
误:Statistics are a branch of mathematics.
正:Statistics is a branch of mathematics.
误:The variety of pictures at this exhibition please me.
正:The variety of pictures at this exhibition pleases me.
6. 动名词与不定式的误用,例如:
误:I hope visiting Beijing again.
正:I hope to visit Beijing again.(hope不接动名词?)
误:I ’d rather staying where I am.
正:I’d rather stay where I am.(would rather 要接省略to 的不定式)
二、注意句子的完整性
一个句子必须完整,就是说在意义和结构上都是完整的,以完整的结构来表达完整的意思,试比较
意义不完整:July is the hottest time of the year, and my birthday comes in this month.
改进: I was born in the hottest month of the year, July.
意思不完整:Mexico City is great and cosmopolitan, with a fine university and ultramodern architecture, and I hope to go there this summer.
改进:Mexico City is great and cosmopolitan, with a fine university and ultramodern architecture, I hope to go there this summer.
句子的结构完整表现的语法结构上无毛病,试比较:
结构不完整:English is a language, language is something used to communicate with other people.
改进:English is a language which is used to communicate.
结构不完整:A good English class is the all students can speak.
改进:A good English class is one in which all the students can speak.